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| Man near a Car |
Michal has came out from the Bar, walked towards his Car. Heard an agressive voice, suddenly turned around.
"Just a Slap with huge sound."
He opened his eyes, and can't realize is that dream or not. But he can still feel severe pain on his left ear, where he got slapped.
PS: Just a try on 55 fiction. Recently hosted a contest on 55 fiction prompt Ghost. So I've tried mine with the same prompt. Forgive me if I made a mistake. Otherwise tell your review or suggestion about it.
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Haha wow, spooky yet a hilarious story. I loved it, the use of words is good. :) AN awesome 55 fiction first try buddy. Take care !! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks tanya...:) glad you liked it.. take care...
DeleteHmmm.. Very good story.. Too good for a first try.. Keep it going dear..
ReplyDeletethank you deepak...:)
DeleteGood one for a beginner...keep writing
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Beginner Sreedev Soman... Glad to have you here... as I told I worth your word...
DeleteOkay, since this is ur first attempt i must say that you wrote very well....left a puzzle towards the end...that would haunt the reader's mind....keep up the good work going
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ritesh..
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