Showing posts with label Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Story. Show all posts
Wednesday, 14 October 2015
Tuesday, 15 October 2013
Love at it's peak
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| elderly love |
I was in my orphanage on that day.
He came there and said "I promise you, I'll never let you feel alone".
That is the moment, where we are started. Now we have four Grand Children.
I know he will never break his promise.
I dedicate this to all lovers who wants to live their whole life with love.
Image: my.opera.com
Tuesday, 25 June 2013
first crush
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| first crush |
It's on your Birthday,
your appearance seemed like an angel.
I have seen you many times before,
but you are very pretty on that day.
You came to me to give the Chocolates.
I forgot to wish you,
Instead of that I stared at you.
After you have settled down on your place.
Some one came near to me,
then pulled my ear and said "why didn't you finish your Homework..?".
Then I realized, that I was in a punishment in kneeling position for the in-completion of the Homework.
And she is our teacher.
That one year we have studied in the same class,
I don't know what has happened to me in that few minutes.
But now... ya it is the first crush.
Not only me, no one can ever forget their First Crush.
Thursday, 20 December 2012
Sharp 12 Midnight...
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| Man near a Car |
Michal has came out from the Bar, walked towards his Car. Heard an agressive voice, suddenly turned around.
"Just a Slap with huge sound."
He opened his eyes, and can't realize is that dream or not. But he can still feel severe pain on his left ear, where he got slapped.
PS: Just a try on 55 fiction. Recently hosted a contest on 55 fiction prompt Ghost. So I've tried mine with the same prompt. Forgive me if I made a mistake. Otherwise tell your review or suggestion about it.
Image courtesy: epigram.org.uk
Monday, 17 December 2012
Results...!!!(B55F)
Hi friends here are the results....
Please Note: The Idea of voting is just to encourage, not to differ best and worst. each entry stand as Best in unique way. So all are Best Fictionists. Thanks for sharing your creativity here. I really enjoyed it, hope you too.
Names No. of Votes
1. Tanya Sehgal => 4
2. Green Speck => 6
3. Sayantini Bhattacharya => 4
4. Neha Agarwal => 3
5. Anirudh => 6
6. MuthuKumar.A => 4
7. Tanaya Nath => 6
8. Thewhitescape => 3
9. Look For A Lovely Thing => 3
As we have 4 members who have got equal votes, here we're declaring those four as winners and other 6 as runner ups.
Thanks for your support and encouragement friends. You can grab your batches by copy pasting the HTML code below. Happy Blogging...!!!
Thursday, 13 December 2012
The Voting Begins..!!
Voting Lines are closed now,
Results are published click here
Now it's time to Vote...
Before announcing about Voting guidelines I thank every participants, for contributing and sharing their creations here. All the entries are really very Innovative, so every participants are at the best, in unique way. And thanks again for sharing your creation through this contest.
The voting lines are now open for the "Best 55 Fictionist Contest". And the voting Guidelines are given below...
Rules:
- You can cast up to 3 votes, but for 3 different entries.
- No need to put vote for your own entry. It has been added already behalf of you. So every entry already has an vote behalf of it's Author. Other than that, you can encourage your readers to vote for your entry.
- Participants and any of the Readers of Beginner(this blog) can vote(others votes will not be considered). Don't forgot to visit all the Entries/Links before deciding to Vote.
- The voting lines will be closed on 16-12-2012(Sunday) midnight. After that results will be announced and Badges will be provided.
Voting Format:
Serial number and Name of the participant followed by the reason or suggestions, If any.
for example:
1. Sasikumar
10. JOHN
5. Shilpa
(Here goes the reason or suggestion)
You can send your votes through the Comment Box of this post. As I have enabled the comment moderation your votes won't be reviled before the results. Just enter your votes in given format and publish the comment that's it.
As we have 10 participants, the top 3 persons who gets the highest number of votes will be declared as the winners and other 7 persons will be declared as runner ups... So there will be two badges available Winner and Runner up!
As we have 10 participants, the top 3 persons who gets the highest number of votes will be declared as the winners and other 7 persons will be declared as runner ups... So there will be two badges available Winner and Runner up!
List of participants:
| 1. | Tanya Sehgal | 6. | MuthuKumar.A | |
| 2. | Green Speck | 7. | Tanaya Nath | |
| 3. | Sayantini Bhattacharya | 8. | Thewhitescape | |
| 4. | Neha Agarwal | 9. | Look For A Lovely Thing | |
| 5. | Anirudh | 10. | The Ghost of Winter (By A Great Liar) |
All the best for every one!!!
Wednesday, 12 December 2012
Independence or Dependence...!!!
In an Indian Farmer's dream...
Indian Farmer : Hey FDI Angel, Why did you came here?
FDI Angel : I came here to save the farmers and poor people of your country.
Indian Farmer : Oh! great but How?
FDI Angel : I'll make some changes in consumerism, production and infrastructural development.
Indian Farmer : These things will help the Higher Class people. How do we get benefit.?
FDI Angel : I've not yet, even think about it...
Indian Farmer : Then what will happen to our Independence.
FDI Angel : Nothing will happen for that. It'll be with me very safely.
Indian Farmer : !!!!@#$%^&**!!!! Oh, God.
FDI Angel : Bye....!!!
He woke up suddenly...
Oh! Sh** this should not happen.
He prayed to God. And gone to his work.
Indian Farmer : Hey FDI Angel, Why did you came here?
FDI Angel : I came here to save the farmers and poor people of your country.
Indian Farmer : Oh! great but How?
FDI Angel : I'll make some changes in consumerism, production and infrastructural development.
Indian Farmer : These things will help the Higher Class people. How do we get benefit.?
FDI Angel : I've not yet, even think about it...
Indian Farmer : So we poor people should face the consequences, and we have to depend you for everything.
FDI Angel : Yes, Of course.Indian Farmer : Then what will happen to our Independence.
FDI Angel : Nothing will happen for that. It'll be with me very safely.
Indian Farmer : !!!!@#$%^&**!!!! Oh, God.
FDI Angel : Bye....!!!
He woke up suddenly...
Oh! Sh** this should not happen.
He prayed to God. And gone to his work.
Tuesday, 11 December 2012
Risk your Life to Live
Thursday, 6 December 2012
I still Love You. - My entry for the Get Published contest
This Story is about the Love between two College going students Sharvan and Shalini (real names are changed) and the incidents happened in their life. Here narrator is Sharvan's friend.
As I mentioned earlier this is not just a story, this is an incident that has happened in the protagonists life.
I'm not going to tell that the protagonists are perfect, vice and blah blah blah...
As like as everybody Sharvan is a simple college going guy, he has some dreams and ambitions, of course some good qualities but when there is a need. He stays as a paying guest in a well developed city but his native is a rural area.
On the other end Shalini is an average scoring student but hard worker, who doesn't know other than her family, friends and college. Her friends circle is very small as she lives in her native village, which is located in deep south India.
The rest of the story is about how they've got introduced and how the love blossoms between them. Is they both carried it in good and bad situations.
And how the Devilish moment has came in their lovely life and what is the reason behind it, and how they suffered.
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| aggressive love |
Because of that devilish incident, I believe in
"Situation and Society can make Angels to Daemons and Daemons to Angels"
This is not a usual love story which sets the genuine characters to make the story better. But it has the other real things and real characters to make the story even better. And filled with real emotions, incidents and twists.
This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs fromYashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.
Tuesday, 30 October 2012
I Wish to...
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| Love |
I wish to feel your breath forever,I wish to hear your voice forever,I wish to smell your tress forever,I wish to hold your hands forever,I wish to taste your kiss forever,I wish to sink in your eyes forever,I wish to react for your feelings forever,I wish to be there for you forever,And I wish to be the only one, who has your love forever.
Monday, 15 October 2012
The Perfect Marriage Life
Tuesday, 18 September 2012
"May you live to a ripe old age"
"May you live to a ripe old age" How do you take this phrase..? As a blessing or as a curse.
Consider this, the elderly population in India is continuously increasing and the problems they are facing is also increasing simultaneously. 60% of elderly couples in India are forced by their children to leave their homes. So the number of peoples in old age homes are constantly increasing and also most of the parents are now deciding to live in old age homes rather than living with their children.
In India, unlike USA, parents do not leave their children on their own after they turn 18 but children find it hard to accept the fact that there are times when parents want to feel the love that they once shared with them.
There are times when parents just want to relax and want their children to reciprocate their care. Every parents wants to see their child grow and be successful but no parent wants their child to treat them like an unnecessary load on their responsibilities.
Old age cannot be avoided. It is a phase of life, which will arrive and stay till death takes its toll.
Our culture recognizes the status of the parents as that of God. A moral duty is put on the children to take care of their parents. But nowadays what we are observing in our society is that the children are not willing to take care of their parents, they do not want to spend money on them, they are treating their parents as aliens, they do not want to share an emotional bond with parents. These children are forgetting that the foundation of their life is built up by the parents. They are forgetting their moral and ethical duties towards their parents. This is because of fast life, industrialization, money oriented minds, inflation. Children have no time to look after their parents because of their busy schedule and as a consequence of this situation the elders are getting neglected.
Why do we tend to forget that the reason we are in this world is our parents, the reason we studied is our parents, the reason we were alive all this while is our parents, the reason we survived all the diseases is our mother’s care. The hands who made us walk is our parents’. When we were kids we never thought of it but we knew that no matter what, our parents will be by our side. But when our time came to show our respect, to reciprocate the love, to show our gratitude, we back out.
Consider this, the elderly population in India is continuously increasing and the problems they are facing is also increasing simultaneously. 60% of elderly couples in India are forced by their children to leave their homes. So the number of peoples in old age homes are constantly increasing and also most of the parents are now deciding to live in old age homes rather than living with their children.
In India, unlike USA, parents do not leave their children on their own after they turn 18 but children find it hard to accept the fact that there are times when parents want to feel the love that they once shared with them.
There are times when parents just want to relax and want their children to reciprocate their care. Every parents wants to see their child grow and be successful but no parent wants their child to treat them like an unnecessary load on their responsibilities.
The problems in old age is in two forms: emotional and physical. Many studies have proved that the two are actually interconnected. No precautionary measures can avoid these problems; senior citizens just have to face them bravely.
But the only thing they need is love from their children and family. Those who can afford, try to reduce their guilt by sending their old parents to the home for the aged. But seldom do they realize that although their parents or grandparents may get physical care in these institutions, their emotional needs of affection and love by their own near and dear ones remain unfulfilled. What the youngsters of today fail to realize is that they will get old too some day and may have to meet a similar fate, because history is bound to repeat itself and a person reaps what he sows.
It's time to realize that our parents need us till the end. So don't soak them, love them don't treat them as a burden. They are waiting for the Soak No More state...
Even when they are counting their last breath, they are still thinking of us!
Tuesday, 21 August 2012
College Days 3
The new
friends Harsha, Harni and Peter attended their first day class. As the days
roll on, Harsha and Harni become very close because they spend more time
together in college and college bus and even in their home they were located near.
So they become close friends, though Peter is in their gang.
Peter has his
own car he use it to come to college, he is very rich. So he spent less time
with Harsha and Harni. Because of his carelessness Peter stayed as a below
average student. Harsha is an average studying student and obviously Harni is a
good scoring student. She help them both when it comes to studies.
Both Harsha’s
and Harni’s family situation is same, middle class family which needs their support
physically and financially. So they both have to finish their degree with good
grade and should get placed in a good company. Peter is already a part time
Business man so there is no need for him to get good grade, he is studying just
to get a degree certificate. His family background is high class and his father
is one of the great Business magnets in that city.
Their college
life is going on very normal Harni is there to help them in studies and Peter
is there to do anything for his friends they three are good friends to their
class mates.
After some
weeks….
That was
another normal day. Harsha and Harni step down from their college bus and
entered into the college. Harni holds a book in her hand and she gave the
assignment papers of them to Harsha. They both are sincerely reading the book
for their class test and walking towards their class room.
Someone
stopped them, “Excuse me, can you show me the first year classroom?”
Harsha and
Harni stopped reading and looked up to see who is that, Harsha was stunned. The
person is a pretty modern girl looks very gorgeous. He just looked at her face
and stood like a statue. He can’t hear the noise around him. Harni and that
girl are discussing about something, after few minutes she left that place.
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| College days |
Now Harni
started to alert Harsha, she taped on his shoulder and called “Hey Harsha…,
hey fool, are you here, hello…” finally she taped on his back head strongly.
Now he realized what is happening.
Harni asked
“what happened dude? Are you Ok..!!”
Harsha
replied “ya harni I’m Ok” and asked “where is that girl? Is she new to our
college?”
“why are you
asking?” Harni asked him.
“she looks
new, I didn’t saw her before, that’s why” he replied.
Harni said “I
know everything about you, you was mentally out of the world for few minutes”.
She saw his hands those are empty and she shouted “Oh god where are the
assignment papers?” and she found the assignment papers floating in the air,
then they both caught all the papers by running behind it.
“sorry Harni,
I was completely impressed by her, that’s why I missed the assignment papers, I
just wana know all about her. Who is she? what is her name? where is she?” Harsha asked.
Harni started
to tell “Ok idiot friend, she is a new student to our class, her native is the
nearest city, now she went to meet our Director of College”
“Oh Ok,! what
is her name?” Harsha asked.
Harni replies
“Yes I forgot to say, her name is Sowmya” and said “now you are going to meet
her, give me the assignment papers I’ll submit it, I have to meet our Professor
you go carry on see you in class…” she left that place.
Now Harsha is
walking towards the Director of College’s office.
To be continued…
Sunday, 29 July 2012
College Days 2
The two new
students ‘Harsha’ and ‘Harni’ entered into the college, with many expectations
about their college life and with little bit of nervousness. As it was a first
day for fresher’s, the college management arranged the inauguration function
for fresher’s. So every new student’s can know about each other.
| Image credits caluniv.ac.in |
Now we follow
Harsha. After said bye to Harni he is now looking for the inauguration function
hall. And he found a notice board which shows all detail about the function
hall. As directed in the notice board Harsha walked towards the function hall.
And he entered into it, now he has to find the reception and register his name.
Suddenly someone taped on his shoulder and said “Hai brother!” Harsha turned his head and looked behind. There was a
stylish guy who wore a T-shirt, jean and Goggles standing behind Harsha. And
the stylish guy continues “I’m Peter, are
you looking for the registration table? come with me I’ll show, just now only I
have finished mine ” and he shows the registration table for Harsha, and
guided him to fill it. Harsha thanked him.
Peter says “come on man don’t say thanks to me here
after. All right tell me about yourself
what’s your name where are you from bla bla bla…”
Harsha begins
to say “I’m Harsha….” And they both
walked towards the function hall. After some time the inauguration function
started. And the Director of the college begin to give welcome speech, then
Peter started to sleep and told Harsha to wake him after they finished their
speeches. Because, Peter hates this kind of speeches.
After the
speech, first year student’s started to introduce themselves. After that, the
function ends. And they arranged a tea party for the student’s.
Harsha and
Peter came there to have their tea. There was a senior group teasing the new
student’s. And making them to do, what the seniors want them to. One of the
senior called Harsha and Peter. They both came there. The senior asked both of
them to hold their ears and put sit-ups until they say stop. Now Harsha
understood that they are raging them. And started to put sit-ups.
Suddenly the
senior called a girl who passed that way. Harsha looked at the girl and
shocked.
The girl is Harni. And Harsha thinks “she gona find that I’m not a senior
student Oh God! But it’s Ok she also going to put sit-ups like me HaHaa…”
Harni came
there. The senior asked “Harni how are you? Why are you here?”
Harni replies
“Now I’m a student of this college. And I’m your junior”
“Oh Ok! See
this juniors putting sit-ups, do you wana join?” senior said with smile.
Harni looked
at Harsha and Peter, and started to laugh. And thinks “Oh Harsha is not a
senior, he was just tried to kidding me”
“If you want
me to do so, I’ll do but I will tell it to your mom tomorrow” said Harni
“Cool! cousin
just asked for fun, Ok you go I’ll handle them” senior replies
Harni asked “Hey
they are my friends let them go”
“What your
friends, Ok Ok. Hey stop you can go now” senior said to Harsha and Peter.
Harni said
bye to her cousin.
Harsha, Harni
and Peter are walked towards their classroom. Harsha and Peter said thanks to
Harni.
Harsha asked
Harni “Harni, me and Peter want you to be a good friend of us, will you?”
“Hey stop,
you are already my friends” Harni replied
They three
joined their hands.
Friday, 20 July 2012
Importance of Hair and Hair care
As compared
to Girls, Guys are little bit lazy to do everything, including me. It continues
when it comes to Hair Problems.
Being a Guy
it took long time for me to ‘realize the importance of Hair and Hair care’
after suffered by many Hair Problems.
I thought
‘hair care is not that much important for guys’. But my hair taught me a good
lesson about it.
As like as
everyone, I have experienced my first hair problem in teenage. It is not
because of hormone changes, it is because of my carelessness.
When I was a
kid, my hair looked silky soft, smooth and thick. I received many complements
from my friends and relatives about my hair. So I feel very blessed.
As I turned
to teenager. I used some materials to style my hair. I used hairspray, hair
color, and hair gels etc.. I used these accessories to look stylish and modern.
Even though I know these items are chemical and alcoholic contents I started to
use it. Because I have studied somewhere that hair grows from dead cells. So
when we cut the hair it doesn’t pain. So I thought using these accessories
won’t affect. And these materials gave different stylish looks to my hair. At
that time I don’t know there is lots of stress behind that.
After
sometimes I have had my first experience of hair problem, it started with hair
fall. When I comb my hair every day I saw my hair fall increases. And
simultaneously it loses its silky soft texture and turned to dry hair. Day by
day it increased and my hair loosed its original texture.
I was worried
about it and I realized how much hair is important to a guy, and if it goes
like this I’ll be bald quickly.
Now it is the
time to change. I started to know the hair care tips from many girls and family
members and friends.
Finally I
filtered some easy steps to follow, they are
·
Oil
your hair regularly it will bring back your silky softness,
·
Wash
your hair two/three times in a week with good shampoo and good conditioner.
·
Try
to avoid using chemical products like hair spray, hair color and hair gel etc…
because stylish hair won’t last but healthy hair does.
·
Last
but not least, maintain good lifecycle eat, sleep and do your work, in correct
timings regularly.
Even much
more things are there to put an end to your hair problems. But these things are
enough for guys to maintain healthy hair.
And finally
these simple steps worked well and my hair started to regain its silky
softness, thickness and all its textures back.
After sometimes it seems difficult to do oil regularly in this busy life. And as like many folks I don’t like oils.
So I prefer “DoveNourishing Oil Care”. It is much better than using oils.
Because of
its “Fiber actives and Revolutionary Vita Oils” smoothness, shine and softness
will be restored.
As “Dove
Nourishing Oil Care” is one of the “Dove Damage Therapy” it can give good
treatment by deeply nourishing and replenishing essential nutrients. And it
contains natural Coconut, Almond and Sunflower oils which can replenish
essential vitamins.
When I used
Dove for the first time. I used it as directed on the backside. It gives the
softness to my hair in first wash.
Then I
started to use it three times a week. It adds the softness, silkiness,
smoothness and thickness to my hair. And
that was the end of my hair problems!
Then I
changed the hair care steps as shown below,
·
Wash
your hair two/three times in a week with good shampoo (Dove Nourishing Oil Care)
and good conditioner (Dove Nourishing Oil Care).
·
Try
to avoid using chemical products like hair spray, hair color and hair gel etc…
because stylish hair won’t last but healthy hair does.
·
Last
but not least, maintain good lifecycle eat, sleep and do your work, in correct
timings regularly.
These steps
are much easier than above mentioned steps.
Are you aware
about your hair?
Check this
out Dove Hair-Aware App and it will
show you the correct treatment for your hair problems.
This post is written for the
Indiblogger’s Dove contest under
If you like it, do vote for it here.
I
thank Indiblogger and Dove for sending me a wonderful gift hamper.
...Thanks for reading...
Wednesday, 11 July 2012
College Days 1
There is a boy, who has finished his schooling's and awaiting for his first day of College. As like as everybody he is very excited about his college life. And the day came.
Morning 6o'clock the alarm rings. There is a voice which says "come on 'Harsha' wake up, it is first day. if you miss the college bus then that will be a big problem". yes his name is Harsha.
He woke up. After some time he is ready and his mother asked him to have breakfast. He is so exited and nervous about his first day. He had his breakfast faster and ran.
Before he reach there, the College bus came. He saw the bus and run towards it, finally he got the bus. His heart beat is now at the peak, he is looking for a place to sit. But there is no seat for him. The bus was already full, he decided to sit on the steps.
He watched others in the bus, everyone are very busy with their work. He try to talk with a guy who wear a big specs.
Harsha asked "are you new to this college?"
He replies "no."
"Then which year you're?" asked Harsha .
"3rd year, i have an important presentation today we'll chat later" he replies.
"OK carry on" said Harsha .
Now the bus reached the next stop, but nobody is there. Bus stays there for 5 mins nobody has come, then the bus started to move on.
Suddenly a sweet voice traveled along the air which shouts "Stop, Stop, Stop the bus!"
Harsha looks outside of the bus, he saw a girl running towards the bus and shouting to stop it. He asked the driver to stop the bus, and the bus stopped.
Harsha helped the girl to get in, and she is at the same condition as Harsha. Now her heart beat is at peak.
"Have some water" said Harsha, and he gave his water bottle.
She replies "no thanks i have my own."
Then Harsha goes to his place and sat down and watched her.
The girl looks everywhere for a place.
Harsha thinks "there is no seats ma that's why i'm here, same situation for you now. this is single door bus , there is no way you have to stand. ha ha..."
But the girl came to him and asked "shall we share this place?"
And he was aw-wk! and then agreed.
After some time she asked the same question which Harsha asked to the specs guy. "Is this your first day to this college?"
He remains silent and asked her "what about you?"
"I'm new to this college, and i have many expectations about my College Days." she said.
Now Harsha decided to act like a senior student.
He said "i'm a 3rd year student."
He continuous "You have to call me senior sir" and asked "what's your name?"
Now she is scared and replied "i'm 'Harni'!"
The bus reached the college.
"now you can go, but meet me evening in bus shed" said Harsha...
Both of them stepped into their college .........!!!!!!!
Continue reading......
Morning 6o'clock the alarm rings. There is a voice which says "come on 'Harsha' wake up, it is first day. if you miss the college bus then that will be a big problem". yes his name is Harsha.
He woke up. After some time he is ready and his mother asked him to have breakfast. He is so exited and nervous about his first day. He had his breakfast faster and ran.
Before he reach there, the College bus came. He saw the bus and run towards it, finally he got the bus. His heart beat is now at the peak, he is looking for a place to sit. But there is no seat for him. The bus was already full, he decided to sit on the steps.
He watched others in the bus, everyone are very busy with their work. He try to talk with a guy who wear a big specs.

Harsha asked "are you new to this college?"
He replies "no."
"Then which year you're?" asked Harsha .
"3rd year, i have an important presentation today we'll chat later" he replies.
"OK carry on" said Harsha .
Now the bus reached the next stop, but nobody is there. Bus stays there for 5 mins nobody has come, then the bus started to move on.
Suddenly a sweet voice traveled along the air which shouts "Stop, Stop, Stop the bus!"
Harsha looks outside of the bus, he saw a girl running towards the bus and shouting to stop it. He asked the driver to stop the bus, and the bus stopped.
Harsha helped the girl to get in, and she is at the same condition as Harsha. Now her heart beat is at peak.
"Have some water" said Harsha, and he gave his water bottle.
She replies "no thanks i have my own."
Then Harsha goes to his place and sat down and watched her.
The girl looks everywhere for a place.
Harsha thinks "there is no seats ma that's why i'm here, same situation for you now. this is single door bus , there is no way you have to stand. ha ha..."
But the girl came to him and asked "shall we share this place?"
And he was aw-wk! and then agreed.
After some time she asked the same question which Harsha asked to the specs guy. "Is this your first day to this college?"
He remains silent and asked her "what about you?"
"I'm new to this college, and i have many expectations about my College Days." she said.
Now Harsha decided to act like a senior student.
He said "i'm a 3rd year student."
He continuous "You have to call me senior sir" and asked "what's your name?"
Now she is scared and replied "i'm 'Harni'!"
The bus reached the college.
"now you can go, but meet me evening in bus shed" said Harsha...
Both of them stepped into their college .........!!!!!!!
Continue reading......
Tuesday, 10 July 2012
Cinderella's super tresses and Speaking Dove's
Cinderella is a joyful pretty girl, she was living in a village. She is the only girl who has the longest beautiful tresses in that village.
| Image from http://pharoahess.deviantart.com |
One day a strange man came to the village, everyone in the village looked at him. He was so nervous, and very hungry. Some folks in village asked about him. As he began to say everyone rounded up to hear.
He said "I'm a Doctor, i was travelling through the forest near this village with my friends for a vacation, now i lost my friends and my things are with them, i don't have anything except this cloths and my Mouth-organ. I'm very hungry now can you please give some thing to have..!"
Before he ends his sentence, Cinderella brought him some food items. The Doctor don't even saw her face, he just grabbed that food items and started to eat. After he had all of that, he thanked Cinderella and he saw her beautiful eyes which shows plenty of pleasure.
At that first sight he fell in love with her. Obviously, any guy who saw her pretty face and beautiful tresses will fell in love. But he doesn't saw her beautiful long black tresses yet.
Then Cinderella left that place. And the village people allowed him to stay there until he finds his friends.
'Sun sets down'
On the night he looks around the village for Cinderella. He founds her place, but it is closed and there was a bright light glows inside her house.
He knocked the door by asking "is anybody there?" but there is no reply.
He didn't stop, he knocked it again and again.
Then there was a sweet voice came from inside asking "who is that? and what you need?"
He replies "i'm the doctor whom you helped morning, i just want to talk to you. can you open the door"
"no not now, i'll see you tomorrow under the big tree near the Lake" she said.
"just few words, please open the door" he said. "wait under the tree morning i'll surely come" she replied.
He can't leave that place before see her pretty face. He looks around that small house and found a little gap. A bright light ray came from that gap. He looks into that gap and he was shocked about what he saw.
On the next morning Cinderella was waiting under the big tree for him. Surprisingly she heard some music. She followed that and saw the Doctor playing the Mouth-organ. Suddenly she hide under a big rock.
After the doctor came there, she came out casually and walked towards him.
She asked "are you waiting for long time?"
"no, i came just now" he replies.
"Oh! OK tell me what's matter?" she asked.
He proposed his love to her by giving a beautiful wet Read Rose. She avoid his proposal and told "i'm not the right girl for you, i can't accept it sorry".
"Why Cinderella don't you like me?" he asked by holding her shoulder.
She can't control her emotion "i love you but i cant marry you, i'm not a normal girl" she cried.
He holds her hand, then hugged and said "i know about that".
She was shocked. He said all the things happened yesterday night.
And he continuous "When i saw you through the gap, i saw your black tresses are grown very longer and turned into grey color and it glows like a bright light. It was a shock to me, at that time a hand touched my shoulder, it increases my shocking. I turned to see who is that, i saw a old lady. suddenly she holds my hand and said that she is your mother and explained about your super tresses. She told that your tresses will look normal in sunlight and turns like this after the Sun sets and it will do everything you say. Finally she asked me about our love and i promised to her, i'll marry you. Then only i understood that it is a super power of you."
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"You all are saying it is a super power, but for me it is a great problem. I cant live my life as a normal girl. I can't do somethings which everyone does. I want to feel free and live without any special powers. I want to mingle with people and share my soul with you. By having this power i can't do these things ever. I hate this... I completely hate this...!!!" she finished with tears.
"Oh my dear, don't cry. If it is your wish i'll find a solution for it" doctor says. "But how?" she asks. "Don't worry I know how to handle this come with me" then he bring her to her mother.
They asked about this to Cinderella's mother. And she asked him to don't even think about it.
"Why?" doctor asked. "There is a way but it is too difficult to handle, and it is very dangerous if someone go behind it, then they will be lost" says Cinderella's mother.
"Tell me the way, and i will do it for my Love" said doctor.
"You have to reach the top of the hill near the forest, and you have to face 5 traps after that you have to find the 'couple of Speaking Doves' and bring them here. This is the way" mother says.
"No you don't do that, if it is my fate i'll accept it" Cinderella stops him.
The Doctor kissed her and gave a rose and silently left that place with a smile.
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Now he have to find the "couple of Speaking Doves". But it is not easy to find them, he searched everywhere on the top of the hill. He was so tired, he sat under a big tree and started to play his mouth-organ. While playing it, he has been distracted by a noise which came from the top of the tree. Suddenly he looks up and there was the couple of Speaking Doves arguing themselves.
He explains the problem of Cinderella's super tresses to the Doves and they agree to go with him. But they put an agreement, "If wee have to come with you, you have to answer our questions". And the doctor agreed for that.
Doves started to question, "Which is the favorite color of Cinderella?".
He answered "White".
Doves asked "What would Cinderella do when she saw somebody is in trouble?"
He answered "Without no question she will Help them."
Doves asked "If we help Cinderella, what will you do for us?".
He answered "Anything you want me to".
Doves said "Sacrifice your soul for Cinderella."
He remains silently for a minute.
Doves asked "Won't you do that, for her? why are you silent?"
He said "I have to share my soul with Cinderella. If i sacrifice it then who will do that?"
Now the Doves remains Silent, and they said "You are the perfect match for Cinderella, and you deserve that. Take us to Cinderella"
The Doctor reaches the Village with the Doves, and it seem to be Sunset. When he reaches Cinderella her Beautiful tresses turned into Grey glowing long tresses.
He gave her a kiss and hold that Grey glowing long tresses and said "with or without this you're my Soul-mate."
Now the Dove's did the magic.
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Now Cinderella feels free and she is very happy without her super tresses. She enjoys her life which she wants to. She loves her Long Black Tresses and her soul-mate who made, that for her.
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